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The completed six-part novel draft is just under 75,000 words, with only revision left.
Briefing
A six-part novel draft is finished—clocking in just under 75,000 words—and the writer is now shifting from drafting momentum to a careful, layered revision plan. The core takeaway isn’t just “the book is done,” but how the process changed: after an early struggle with crucial story “nuances” that hadn’t clicked, the draft moved into a sustained, unusually effortless flow. That shift made finishing feel both achievable and, in hindsight, faster than expected.
At the end of Part Five, the writer had only Part Six left, structured as four chapters with a clear sense of what must happen. The remaining work centered on writing pivotal scenes and sequences without padding—everything had already been simmering, so the job was to “sit down and write it.” Confidence was tempered by stress from unrelated personal issues and by the common late-draft tendency to procrastinate when the finish line feels near. Still, the plan stayed focused: keep writing daily when possible, but don’t force it when mental fatigue hits.
As the draft approached its final chapters, the writing quality dipped. Scenes began to feel “depthless,” with insight landing as superficial and the narrator’s voice losing some of its usual electric richness. The writer linked the problem to fatigue—working nearly nonstop for 18 days—and to the emotional pressure of ending a first draft. Instead of pushing through, a few days off were taken to recover creative energy. That break helped: when writing resumed, the second-to-last chapter’s quality improved noticeably, and the final chapter came together quickly enough to finish the whole book in one stretch.
The draft’s strengths are concentrated in character and relationship work, described as the best the writer has done—messy in places, as first drafts are, but compelling in how relationships developed and revealed themselves during drafting. The writer also frames “mess” as a feature of first drafts: technical murkiness and overwritten or convoluted sections are acceptable because revision can clean them up, while the real goal is to discover complexity through the act of writing.
Revision, however, will be intricate rather than structural. The writer expects changes that don’t drastically move plot pieces, but require fine-tuning emotional and narrative “weaving” across scenes—especially where the groundwork exists yet the intricacies don’t fully tie together. A specific pain point remains: the last line. Unlike past work where the final image often arrives during drafting, the ending words had to be chosen as a placeholder and later felt mediocre, even after stopping to think for minutes.
Overall, the finish is paired with a realistic post-draft workflow: let the draft rest, then read through to solidify edits. The writer plans to address early sections that may be overlong due to difficulty ending scenes when the purpose wasn’t clear, while preserving later scenes that already land well. The result is a completed first draft under 80k words—unrefined, but rich enough to justify the next phase of careful, detail-heavy revision.
Cornell Notes
The writer finishes a six-part novel draft at just under 75,000 words, leaving revision as the next major task. Early in the drafting process, crucial story nuances were hard to perceive, but once they “clicked,” writing became unusually effortless and immersive. Near the end, fatigue and the emotional weight of ending a first draft caused scenes to feel flat and under-insightful, prompting a short break that restored writing quality. The draft’s biggest win is character and relationship complexity, which developed strongly during drafting. Revision is expected to be intricate—fine-tuning emotional and narrative connections—while the main technical issues are considered manageable first-draft mess. The one notable dissatisfaction is the final line, which had to be chosen without a clear ending phrase during drafting.
What changed in the writer’s process that made drafting feel “effortless” later on?
Why did writing quality drop near the end, and what was done about it?
How does the writer decide when to write through stress versus stepping back?
What strengths does the writer identify in the completed draft?
What kind of revision does the writer expect to do next?
What specific ending problem remains after finishing the draft?
Review Questions
- What does the writer say is the difference between “effortlessness” in first drafts versus revision, and why does that matter for how they approach drafting?
- Which factors contributed to the late-draft decline in scene execution, and how did the writer test whether a break would help?
- Why does the writer treat first-draft mess as acceptable or even desirable, and what does that imply about their revision priorities?
Key Points
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The completed six-part novel draft is just under 75,000 words, with only revision left.
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A breakthrough in understanding crucial story nuances transformed drafting from struggle into sustained flow.
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Late-draft fatigue and resistance made scenes feel flat and less insightful, leading to a short recovery break.
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The writer’s strongest draft achievement is relationship and character complexity that emerged during writing, not just from planning.
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Revision is expected to be detail-heavy and emotionally nuanced rather than a major structural overhaul.
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The final line remains a weak spot because it was chosen without a clear ending phrase during drafting, leaving the ending slightly underwhelming.
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The writer plans to rest the draft briefly, then read through to identify what needs intricate fixing—especially early scenes that ran long when endings wouldn’t land.