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Recent Reads #45 | The good, the bad, and the ugly

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TL;DR

“Slow Foot” is criticized most for framing: Indigenous characters are portrayed through stereotypes and positioned as invaders to demonic beings, while Puritans are treated as justified because Satan is real in the story’s logic.

Briefing

A sharp split emerges across these October reads: several books win praise for language, form, and emotional precision, while others are criticized for flattening characters and—most severely—using stereotypes in ways the reviewer finds morally and artistically indefensible.

The most pointed negative reaction lands on Brom’s “Slow Foot.” Set in a Puritan village during an apparent witch trial, it blends demonic entities (“The Wild folk”) with a supernatural framing that, in the reviewer’s view, turns into a pro-Christian, anti-Indigenous story. Indigenous characters are described as stereotyped—naive and “childishly” spiritual—and the plot’s supernatural logic is treated as reinforcing harmful ideas: Indigenous people are cast as invaders to demonic beings, while the Puritans are positioned as the ones facing a genuine threat because Satan is real in this world. The reviewer argues that this structure makes the Puritans “right” in a way that can’t be excused by historical setting, and that the book’s framing never meaningfully grapples with colonization from the perspective of the groups it depicts. Beyond the offense, the criticism extends to craft: predictable plot beats, flat characters, and writing the reviewer calls mediocre.

Other books receive more mixed verdicts. Elizabeth V. Aldrich’s novella “Ruthless Little Things” is described as an experimental, fever-dream cascade of sex, drugs, and stream-of-consciousness poetry. The reviewer wanted more queer literature and felt the pain beneath the hedonism, but says the stakes and emotional “grounding” are too abstract. As the novella shifts into poems, the second half feels disjointed and, in their view, emotionally unearned—something that would have worked better as a standalone poetry collection.

Sarah Freeman’s “Times” earns admiration for its precise, dreamy vignettes, but the reviewer says the style prevents tension from building and makes later events feel unearned. James Lee Mather’s “Uncertain King,” by contrast, is praised for subtle strangeness: domestic scenes in the Bahamas carry a “tinge of weirdness” that makes them urgent, with cross-generational relationships recurring throughout. The standout story “boyo” is singled out as exceptional.

On the poetry side, Hanif Abdurraqib’s “Vintage Sadness” is celebrated as a free ebook and recommended as an accessible entry point into his work. The reviewer highlights how the poems start from mundane images and expand in scope, culminating in a powerful long final poem structured as an exchange between a poet and editor.

Several later picks lean toward form-driven experimentation and character dynamics. Sama L. Wardani’s “These Impossible Things” is fast and centered on three Muslim women at major life turning points, but the reviewer finds the tone too contemporary for their usual taste and complains that male characters are either “perfect” or “suck,” leaving little romantic tension. Tupelo Hassman’s “Gods with Little G” begins promisingly with a floaty, Camino-like feel in an evangelical town where media is cut off; yet the reviewer says the setting’s pressure fades and the middle slows. Billy Ray Bell Court’s “Minor Chorus” is described as essayistic and braided—more illumination than narrative—while Eliza Clark’s “Boy Parts” is praised for its unhinged, charismatic photographer protagonist whose control spirals into collapse. Ian Lee’s “The Book of Goose” closes the list with a luminous, nuanced girlhood story about friendship, authorship, and the burden of another person’s thoughts, even if the reviewer sometimes wishes it pushed further.

Overall, the throughline is craft and ethics: when language and structure deepen character and emotion, these books land. When framing becomes predictable or stereotypes are treated as supernatural truth, the reviewer’s disappointment turns sharp.

Cornell Notes

Across these October reads, the reviewer draws a clear line between books that earn emotional impact through language and form—and books that fail through flat characterization or ethically troubling framing. “Slow Foot” is the harshest critique: a Puritan witch-trial story with demonic forces is read as reinforcing anti-Indigenous stereotypes and positioning Puritans as justified because Satan is “real” in the narrative. “Ruthless Little Things” and “Times” are also mixed, with experimental style that the reviewer says blocks tension or emotional grounding. Several titles are praised for subtlety and precision—especially “Uncertain King,” “Vintage Sadness,” and “Minor Chorus”—while “Boy Parts” and “The Book of Goose” stand out for compelling character dynamics and nuanced girlhood.

Why does “Slow Foot” trigger the strongest negative reaction, beyond general dislike?

The criticism centers on framing and stereotypes. Indigenous characters are described as stereotyped (naive, “spiritual civilization” imagery), and the plot’s supernatural structure casts Indigenous people as “invaders” to demonic beings (“The Wild folk”), while the Puritans are treated as facing a genuine threat because Satan is real in this world. The reviewer argues this becomes pro-Christian and anti-Indigenous, with supernatural reinforcement making harmful ideas feel “visible” and therefore tied to the stereotypes rather than just historical background. They also fault the writing for being mediocre, characters for being flat, and the plot for being predictable.

What does the reviewer mean by “emotional grounding” being missing in “Ruthless Little Things”?

The novella is described as a kaleidoscopic, hedonistic fever dream that gradually descends into poetic stream-of-consciousness. The reviewer feels pain beneath the characters’ intense pleasure, but says stakes and the reasons behind events stay abstract and muddled. When the book shifts more fully into poems in the second half, the descent feels disjointed and “unearned” because the first half doesn’t provide enough grounding for that emotional/structural turn.

How does “Times” manage to be admired for style yet still leave the ending underwhelming?

“Times” is praised for precise, prickly, dreamy vignettes—often in very short, paragraph-like chapters. But the reviewer says the style doesn’t allow moments to “sit with” long enough for tension to build. Without that breathing room, later developments feel unearned, so the ending lands as underwhelming despite the writing craft.

What makes “Uncertain King” compelling according to the reviewer’s reading experience?

The collection is set primarily in the Bahamas and is described as subtle and delicate on the surface: domestic, everyday situations. What keeps it urgent is a recurring “tinge of weirdness,” where ordinary scenes carry a strange, compelling quality that makes them feel new. Cross-generational relationships—parents/children, teachers/students—form a key theme, and the story “boyo” is singled out as the best in the book.

How does “Minor Chorus” differ from a conventional novel in structure and effect?

It’s described as essayistic and braided, reading more like an extended exploration than a narrative arc. The unnamed queer Indigenous grad student takes time off to write a novel and interview people, but the ending isn’t treated as a conventional story conclusion. Instead, the book is framed as illumination and discussion, with the character opening up in the way an essay might—through contemplation—rather than through plot-driven resolution.

What does the reviewer find most compelling about “Boy Parts” as it spirals?

The book follows a photographer who finds men in public settings and takes explicit photographs, then centers a relationship with one model and a best friend obsessed with her. The reviewer calls the protagonist charismatic and intimidatingly in control, with a manipulative energy that draws the reader in. As control crumbles, the protagonist’s psyche collapses too, creating a spiral that feels like a staple of the “unhinged woman” canon.

Review Questions

  1. Which specific narrative choices in “Slow Foot” make the reviewer see the book as ethically harmful rather than merely historically inaccurate?
  2. What craft elements (tension-building, grounding, pacing) does the reviewer say distinguish “Times” from books they enjoyed more?
  3. How do the reviewer’s descriptions of form—poetry collection, essayistic novel, braided essay—predict what kind of emotional payoff they expect?

Key Points

  1. 1

    “Slow Foot” is criticized most for framing: Indigenous characters are portrayed through stereotypes and positioned as invaders to demonic beings, while Puritans are treated as justified because Satan is real in the story’s logic.

  2. 2

    “Ruthless Little Things” is praised for intensity and queer joy but faulted for abstract stakes and an emotionally unearned shift into poems that feels disjointed.

  3. 3

    “Times” earns admiration for precise, dreamy vignettes yet disappoints because the style prevents tension from building, making later events feel unearned.

  4. 4

    “Uncertain King” stands out for subtle domestic realism in the Bahamas paired with recurring weirdness and strong attention to cross-generational relationships, especially in “boyo.”

  5. 5

    “Vintage Sadness” is recommended as a free ebook entry point, with poems that expand from mundane images into larger emotional scope, culminating in a standout long final poem.

  6. 6

    “These Impossible Things” is fast and relationship-centered, but the reviewer finds the romantic tension weakened by flat male characters and a tone they consider more contemporary than their usual preference.

  7. 7

    “Minor Chorus” is valued for its essay-like, braided structure—more illumination than narrative closure—while “Boy Parts” is praised for a charismatic, controlling protagonist whose unraveling keeps attention locked in.

Highlights

“Slow Foot” is singled out as both offensive and poorly executed: the supernatural framing is read as reinforcing anti-Indigenous stereotypes and making Puritan persecution feel “right” within the story’s logic.
“Ruthless Little Things” delivers pain under hedonism, but the reviewer says the lack of concrete stakes makes the later poetic descent feel unearned.
“Uncertain King” turns everyday domestic scenes into something urgent by layering subtle weirdness over regular life, with “boyo” as a standout.

Topics

Mentioned

  • Elizabeth V. Aldrich
  • Sarah Freeman
  • James Lee Mather
  • Hanif Abdurraqib
  • Sama L. Wardani
  • Tupelo Hassman
  • Billy Ray Bell Court
  • Eliza Clark
  • Ian Lee
  • Quan Berry
  • Nonaga
  • Sarah Thank and Matthews
  • Jalen