WRITING MY FANTASY BOOK WHILE TRAVELLING [Vietnam & Indonesia🇻🇳🇮🇩]
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The writer packs a computer for the trip specifically to protect evening writing time, turning travel downtime into drafting sessions.
Briefing
A travel-heavy writing sprint in Vietnam and Indonesia is turning into a real drafting breakthrough: after finishing multiple chapters of a new fantasy project, the writer locks in a faster-than-planned schedule—shifting a first-draft deadline from the end of August to the end of July.
The trip begins in northern Vietnam with family travel through Baka (near Sapa) and into Sapa for a short one-night hill trek. The itinerary is built around both logistics and creative time. After a long Redeye journey—about 27 hours of travel with a 12-hour sleep—the writer heads out for breakfast, then plans a market visit with a guide who previously led the same group during a 2017 trip. The Baka Market is described as a standout because it feels local rather than touristy, including vendors selling water buffalo. From there, the group drives roughly 1.5 hours to Sapa, stays overnight, and treks the next day.
Writing becomes the second pillar of the trip. Instead of bringing a computer on past trips, the writer packs one specifically because evenings often mean returning to the hotel with little to do. The new fantasy work—kept unnamed except for the acronym TBO—enters its drafting phase after the writer finishes editing a prior novel (The Animal Sense), which is sent out to critique partners. The approach is methodical: draft quickly, but start with “test” chapters to lock in voice and iron out issues before committing to the full draft. The book is structured into five parts, with an extra “March” buffer for whatever can be produced early.
In Sapa, the writer reports a major creative shift. During a sleeper bus ride from Sapa to Handl (departing around 4:00 p.m. and arriving around 10:00), the writer produces over 3,000 words and finishes chapter 3. A key frustration follows: the computer battery was left on after airport security, limiting further writing mid-ride. Still, the breakthrough is qualitative as well as quantitative. The writer describes earlier chapters as too contemporary and not “otherworldly” enough, especially regarding the main character’s voice. The target tone is fairy-tale-like—light, mythic, and not archaic or overly “distant”—with a magic system that feels “soft.” Ancient Rome is used as a reference point for civic roles and jobs, but the world itself is not meant to resemble a specific Earth time period.
The schedule then accelerates further in Indonesia. After flying through Kuala Lumpur and arriving in Medan, the group reaches Buk Laong in North Sumatra for an orangutan-focused trek. The writer describes intense jungle conditions, including heavy rain, and a dramatic encounter with orangutans: one appears in a tree and later comes down, staying meters away for about an hour as the group watches. Writing continues alongside the trekking. By the end of the Indonesia segment, the writer says part one of TBO is completed—four chapters plus two shorter epistolary chapters—placing them about a month ahead of the original plan. With travel still occupying the first half of April, the writer aims to finish part two by the end of April and now expects the full first draft to land by the end of July rather than August. The journey ends with a promise to continue in a part two covering the rest of Vietnam and a few days in Japan.
Cornell Notes
The writer uses a Vietnam-to-Indonesia family trip as a structured writing sprint for a new fantasy project, TBO. After finishing edits on The Animal Sense, they start drafting TBO with a plan to complete five parts (plus extra work in March) and a first-draft deadline originally set for end of August. In Sapa, a sleeper-bus writing session produces 3,000+ words and finishes chapter 3, alongside a key voice breakthrough: the fantasy needs a lighter, fairy-tale mythic tone rather than a contemporary one. In North Sumatra, orangutan treks and jungle time coincide with finishing part one—four chapters plus two epistolary chapters—putting the writer roughly a month ahead. The result is a revised schedule: part two by end of April and a full first draft by end of July.
How does the writer turn travel time into drafting time without burning out?
What changed in the fantasy voice after the early chapters felt “too contemporary”?
What is the structure of TBO, and how does that shape the drafting goals?
Which travel moments produced the biggest writing gains?
How do the orangutan encounters connect to the overall trip-and-writing rhythm?
Review Questions
- What specific tonal targets does the writer use to judge whether the fantasy voice is working (and what does “too contemporary” mean in practice)?
- How does the writer’s chapter/part structure (including epistolary journal sections) influence the way they measure progress during travel?
- What concrete factors helped or hindered writing productivity during transit (e.g., the computer battery issue), and what does that imply for planning future writing blocks?
Key Points
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The writer packs a computer for the trip specifically to protect evening writing time, turning travel downtime into drafting sessions.
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TBO is organized into five parts, with an extra March buffer, and progress is tracked by completing chapters within each part.
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A sleeper bus ride in Vietnam becomes a major writing block, producing 3,000+ words and finishing chapter 3—battery management becomes a practical lesson.
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The fantasy voice goal is fairy-tale mythic and light, avoiding archaic or overly distant phrasing while keeping the world otherworldly.
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Ancient Rome is used as a reference for civic roles and jobs, not as a historical setting template for the book’s world.
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In North Sumatra, orangutan trekking provides a high-impact experience while the writer still finishes part one—four chapters plus two epistolary chapters.
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The early wins shift the first-draft timeline from end of August to end of July, with part two targeted for end of April.